Angela Kim
October 15, 2007
Writing 101
History Essay Rough Draft #1
Bacon’s Rebellion - Class
Over the years, class distinctions have been a key source of determining who does what. Even now, in modern day, class distinctions are still a major part of lives everywhere. During the time of Bacon’s Rebellion, the status that a person obtained decided where and how that person would live and work. “Bacon’s rebellion illustrated the tensions between white and Indian, planter and slave, and have and have-not in the colony, tensions made worse by an economic depression that must have seemed without end (http://www.cliffnotes.com/WileyCDA/CliffsReviewTopic/Chesapeake-Colonies-Virginia-Maryland.topicArticleId-25073.articleId-25011.html).” Although class, now, is determined by status and education, back then, it was based upon the family/group you were born in to.
Class distinctions influenced the base support for Bacon and colonial authorities because the status and position for a certain person during the time of Bacon’s Rebellion, was determined by that person’s race, class, education, wealth, family, etc. Governor Sir William Berkeley was a veteran of the English Civil Wars, a frontier Indian fighter, a King’s favorite in his first term as Governor in the 1640s, a playwright, and a scholar. Therefore, Governor Berkeley would be known as part of the elite. Nathanial Bacon was troublemaker and schemer, but he was also quite intelligent and eloquent, which by the way he was also
The elite became instigators because they believed that they had the right to “pick on” those who were beneath them, which caused a feud to arise. They may be of a higher class than others, but no need to get cocky and conceited about it. These difficulties encouraged the colonists to find a scapegoat to put all their frustrations on and place the blame for their misfortunes. First came the elite, then the colonists, and then the Indians. Unfortunately, colonists found their scapegoat in the form of the local Indians. Because the colonists had been treated badly by the higher class, they started to treat the Indians the exact same way. I believe that the way people are treated, shapes and forms the way they treat others. For example, if a child had been abused by their parents, as that child grows up and becomes a parent of its own offspring, most likely the baby will also get abused. In the parent’s mind, they believe that that is the only way to punish their kid because that is the way that that parent had been punished when growing up. Those that are favored are spared. Bacon believed that Governor Berkeley had played favorites, so he reported the Governor publicly. Before that,
The people needed a leader to let their voices be heard, and so Bacon was a man for the people, while
The intentions of both Bacon and Berkeley may have been good at the beginning, but this rebellion nearly caused the destruction of the
As I have mentioned before, in Modern life today, class still plays a major role because the class distinctions label who a person may be on the “outside”. It is said that “one’s class is determined largely by: occupation, education and qualifications, income, personal, household and per capita, wealth or net worth, including ownership of land, property, means of production, etc. (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Social_class).” For example, if there was a job opening at Boeing for one position, and there were two applicants that qualified; one from white center who graduated from public schools, and one from Medina who graduated from Lakeside, who would they give the job to? The obvious choice to go with would be the one living in
For those that belonged to the lower side of the bar, they had to endure through many hardships; not by choice. If one was born from a slave, their whole life will be tough because of their family background and status. If one was born from one of those who belonged to the elite, their whole life will have many easy-way-outs. The life that one lived during Bacon’s Rebellion was all determined by class at the instant of when you were born. And even someone with great power can not change the way things were by themselves. Even now, the decided class that a person is placed in can say a lot about that one person.
2 comments:
The very first sentence is the most generic sentence you could have chosen: from word choice to subject, this sentence could be on any topic in the world. Cut all of this and get to the issue. What is your thesis/ argument, and what is your first main point about/ how does it support your thesis?
CliffsNotes are not a suitable resource for this paper. You will need to find another, academic source (ie scholarly paper, etc). In addition, Helium.com admits that ANYone can write for them...so how do you go about justifying its use as a reliable, academic source? The source requirement and your Wiki work is not about busy work -- it's about finding useful, good information -- which you haven't done yet.
Do not use "you" -- it refers directly to the reader and you do not want to do this.
The child abuse example is the WORST case of trying to compare apples and oranges. Plus, you don't know what other students are going through at home. Cut that example.
There is a ton of filler in this, and if you cut most of it you'd still have a good size essay.
Needs LOTS of revision...
You have lots of good information. I like that you have sites listed to prove these facts are accruate. And good word choice
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